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Tuesday, 1 March 2016

Using DRAFT in our Writing

LI: Stretching Sentences


Who: The girl


What: The girl was listening to music while walking home


When: It was just after school and the girl was listening to music while walking home


Where: It was just after school and the girl was listening to music while walking home, on the footpath


Why: It was just after school and the girl was listening to music while walking home, on the footpath because she wasn’t in a rush.

It was just after school and the girl was listening to music while walking home on the footpath, because she wasn’t in a rush.

Today I learnt how to DRAFT and stretch propoally I know this will help me all the time.

1 comments:

Robyn Anderson said...

well done, keep up the good work :) love mum

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